AN: Fangz 2 Tara Gillespie 4 helpin me wif da chapta! BTW preps stop flaming ma story ok!
The next day I woke up in sietch tabr. It was snowing and raining again. on Arrakis. I opened the door of my coffin (we sleep in dem to perserv moistur and to show were goffik) and drank some blood from a bottle I had. My coffin was black ebony and inside it was hot pink velvet with black lace on the ends. I got out of my coffin and took of my giant MCR t-shirt which I used for pajamas over my stillsuit. Instead, I put on a black leather dress, a pentagram necklace, combat boots and black fishnets on. I put on four pairs of earrings in my pierced ears, and put my hair in a kind of messy but not to messy style.
My friend, Stilgar woke up then and grinned at me. He flipped his long black hair with pink streaks and opened his blue-within-blue eyes. He put on his Marilyn Manson t-shirt with a black mini (he is a vampyr transvestite), fishnets and pointy high-heeled boots. We put on our makeup (black lipstick white foundation and black eyeliner.)
“OMFG, I saw you talking to Chani yesterday!” he said excitedly.
“Yeah? So?” I said, blushing.
“Do you like Chani?” he asked.
“No I so fucking don’t!” I shouted.
“Yeah right!” he exclaimed. Just then, Chani walked up to me.
“Hi.” she said.
“Hi.” I replied flirtily.
“Guess what.” she said.
“What?” I asked.
“Well, Good Charlotte are having a concert in Arrakeen.” she told me.
“Oh. My. Fucking. God!” I screamed. I love GC. They are my favorite band, besides MCR.
“Well… do you want to go with me?” she asked.
Notes: Here’s a link to the original My Immortal by Tara Gillespie (at least where I found it this time around): http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4719325/3/My_Immortal_REPOST
Also, I have no idea what AN means, but I deduced that “Fangz” means “Thanks.” Killer.
Hi my name is Paul Muad’Dib and I have ebony black hair (like my soul) that is super strait and pointy it could slice youre throat and icy blue within blue eyes like limpid tears and a lot of people tell me I look like Pete Wentz (AN: if u don’t know who he is get da hell out of here!). I’m not related to Hayley Williams but I wish I was because she’s a major fucking hottie. I’m the Quisatz Haderach but they still make me wear stillsuits I hate them their gay. I have pale white skin. I’m also a Duke, and rule a shitty planet called Arrakis that’s covered in sand and worm mosters but everyon thinks I’m dead (because I really am inside) so they don’t know I’m the real duke and they let the asshole Harkonnens rule the planet while I hide out with the Fremen who like don’t have WiFi or nething. I’m a goth (in case you couldn’t tell) and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there but now that I’m on Arrakis I can’t ware dem anymore. For example today I would wear a black trenchcoat and some chainmale, one earring on the LEFT ear with an upside down cross and black combat boots but insted I had to wear my stupid stillsuit. I can still wear my black lipstick, white foundation, an black eyeliner. I was walking outside the sietch. It was snowing and raining on Arrakis so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. A lot of fremen preps stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them.
“Hey Muad’Dib!” shouted a voice. I looked up. It was…. Chani!
“What’s up Chani?” I asked.
“Nothing.” she said shyly.
But then, I heard my friends call me and I had to go away.
Based on My Immortal by Tara Gilesbie